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AHHH I've re-written the first chapter of my story
You can read it or not (I get rlly awkward when people read my personal work anyway, so if you don't, I really don't mind đ )
Under cut XP
Also, I might add more, but idk this is all I have energy for :3
Tw: very brief mention of suicide.
Word count: 1090
Keyto stood beside his father, absentmindedly holding onto his arm, whacking it back and forth lightly. It amused him greatly; despite the situation he had once again found himself in.
He was back in the mental hospital after his father, Mike had caught him trying to drown again, Keyto hadnât necessarily been trying to hide it too much though. The mental hospital felt like his home, his place where most disliked him, but feared him too much to not speak to him. Out there he was judged and not seen, he felt like a coward, a completely different person to the eccentric energy he bought to the hospital.
With his headphones on he could faintly hear Mike and a receptionist (one that was not his favourite) talking. This was a familiar routine at this point, his therapist, Ruiya would most likely be coming right now to pick him up and get him all settled in. His bag would have to be searched, but Keyto didnât mind, he had clothes, writing equipment and stuffed toysâŚas well as blades, knifes and ropes. Keyto knew theyâd get taken away, but he always got a small kick at watching the concerned face of staff as they carefully extracted all his dangerous equipment.
He stood there with Mike, continuing to play with his arm, resisting the urge to bite it, it was just so biteable! But then he heard the sound of the door opening. Keyto glanced over, a sobbing woman, and rather indifferent looking child walked in. A second receptionist popped her head out and gestured for them over. Mike moved to the side more, as he was still filling out the files for Keytoâs stay. This bonked Keyto a bit, causing a squeaked of shock and offence to come from him. He clung onto Mikes arms tighter, stumbling back a bit and he huffed, glaring up at Mike. Mike didnât see, he simply bought up the hand that Keyto was clinging to, and he pet Keytoâs head softly.
Keyto kept his firm grip on Mikes arm as he peaked over Mike to catch a glimpse at the other kid.
He looked quite tall, definately taller than Keyto (although Keyto wasnât sure if that was a feat of any sorts, he was only 5ft 3), his face set in a scowl, fluffy brown hair falling all over the place, a large swoop of it covering half of his face. There were freckles all over his neck and the sides of his face, they seemed to be covering pretty much anywhere but his direct face.
Keyto went back to playing with Mikes arm :3
The seats in the waiting room were quite uncomfortable but Keyto didnât complain, he curled up next to Mike and stared at the other kid, who was still getting signed in.
âYouâll be alright Keyto ?â
Keyto faintly heard Mike say that, and he forced his eyes away from who he was staring at.
âOf course I will ! When have I not been !â He said, ending with a small giggle.
He saw the concern clear on Mikeâs face, but he was unsure how to respond to it, or comfort, let alone care that Mike was concerned about his wellbeing.
It was a while before the therapist that usually took care of him, Ruiya came through the doors. Keyto hadnât noticed he was still staring at the kid, that had repeatedly given Keyto filthy looks, disturbed that some random kid was watching him.
Ruiya received Keytoâs files once again with a soft smile to the receptionist, flicking through it. This was the shortest time period that Keyto had been out. Usually, he was back within a month, this time it was merely a week. But small setbacks in Keytoâs recovery were nothing but small bumps in the long road.
Keyto chirped up as he saw Ruiya, bouncing up on the seat, his fingers scrunching up into the sleeves of his hoodie as he waved. Ruiya offered a weary wave back, tensing up and bracing impact as he saw Keyto jump up and bolt towards him, crushing him in a tight hug. He was honestly just like a puppy.
âAh, good morning Keyto, I see your back.â Ruiya observed softly, his voice aiming to be as low and soothing as to not set Keyto off into getting even more excited than he already was. It was early in the morning, 5am to be exact, so everybody was still asleep.
âI am !!!â Keyto squeaked back, his whole body squished to Ruiya, he didnât want to let go for a while.
Ruiya didnât make any move to extract him, his brown eyes did take another take at the other patient there in the waiting room. The, supposed, mother was sobbing next to her, supposed, son, who was occasionally glancing over at her, not saying anything. It was not as odd of a sight in here, but it was a sight that made Ruiya feel saddened.
âRuiya.â Mike said, standing up from his seat and walking over. He nodded at the other, not caring that Keyto was clinging to him, the man was nice, and he had any pleasant chats in and out of the hospital with Ruiya.
âMike.â Ruiya said with a soft nod.
Keyto once again fazed out of the conversation, occasionally stomping his feet on the ground, or grasping onto Ruiyaâs back tighter as the two men spoke above him. He was once again resisted the urge to bite and scratch at Ruiyaâs back and arms.
âAlrighty, time to head in, say goodbye to Mike and grab your bag kiddo.â Ruiya encouraged softly, grabbing Keytos shoulders every so slightly and pulling him out from the hug.
âOkieee !â Keyto swung around and waved to Mike, giving him a soft hug, feeling the reciprocation.
âStay safe ok ? Iâll come back to visit in two days, focus on healing.â Mike muttered to him, giving a kiss to his head before letting Keyto go off. Snatching up his bag and following after Ruiya.
âBYEE MIKEE !!!â Keyto called as he left, disappearing into the facility.
Mike watched as his adoptee was swallowed by the doors of the mental hospital. His smile saddened, and he took a few moments of staring at the ground to let himself calm down. Once he had his mind back together, he straightened up, fixing the glasses more firmly on his face before making his way out, back towards the car to his always seemingly alone and quiet apartment.
OKIIEEE IF YOU HAVE ANY FEEDBACK I WOULDNT MIND ANY !!
I'm mainly looking for feedback as in did I get all the English correct, did I repeat anything, do I use the same word or phrase too often, and is it interesting to read. I'm not sure if this will be all there is for the first chapter, I might add more about Levi (the other kid who comes in)